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Paradise Girl by Phill Featherstone (view source)
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|title=Paradise Girl
|author=Phill Featherstone
|reviewer= Lesley MasonJill Murphy
|genre=General Fiction
|summary= A good solid plot, but the characterisation is weak. Good enough to make me want to see how it would play out, but I couldn’t help feeling it needed a tighter edit and stronger characters.