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There are stylistic errors (such as the omniscient viewpoint creeping in) which should be reasonably easy to fix. Sometimes the author seems unable to separate out appropriate language for diary, conversation and narrative strands of the story. I wonder, in the end, if the diary entries really work? With errors, repetitions and appallingly inconsistent punctuation detracting from my enjoyment, I also wonder if anyone read the final draft all the way through.
The Bookbag would like to thank the publishers for sending this book. Honno is a an interesting Welsh women's co-operative which has previously published [[:Category|:Claire Peate|Claire Peate]], [[:Category:Lorraine Jenkin|Lorraine Jenkin]] and [[:Category:Bethan Darwin|Bethan Darwin]] (all recommended by The Bookbag.). My gut feeling is that ''More Than Just a Hairdresser'' might be a much better book for getting acquainted with Nia Pritchard's writing.
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